*vision* your vision with this piece is outstanding! though the name for this piece could have been a little more creative, i would most certainly be amazed by your vision with in this piece.
*originality* your originality for the piece is extremly unique. you not only did one drrawing of the paired kunoichi, you did two. each in postions and performing actions never before seen. i am honored to be your critique.
*techinique* your techinique is amazing! i have never seen anything like it before. the darkened areas of both characters are masterful! the color and texture of the two are blindingly amazing!
the impact is without a doubt the best i have seen yet. you have very good talent. i look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.